tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-213640212013188609.post3927207801559352879..comments2024-02-15T19:36:30.953-08:00Comments on Scumfuck Living in Babylon......: Codex Kalachnikova Preview #3: The CacheLiving in Babylonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06074015464611189363noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-213640212013188609.post-953821018890816162012-09-27T22:27:07.102-07:002012-09-27T22:27:07.102-07:00I started reading CK preview #3--and within the fi...I started reading CK preview #3--and within the first paragraph observed that you need an editor/proofreader--of which I am one. Send me the rest and I'll read it, and correct the typos/cognates, amd grammatical errata--like this glaring one:<br /><br /><br />Tuesday, August 28, 2012Codex Kalachnikova Preview #3: The Cache <br /><br /><br />The Bushido lords would never admit it, but there were several unofficial methods of avoiding the test of the Hand or Heart. The most common, of course, was to die in the wastelands during the Test of the Stomach. Others, such as Bartholomew, managed to prove their worth to the Angels and joined them instead. Some fled to the city of NYE, to make a life as best they can. And others simply found a good water source and settled their, founding their own tiny household. For the most part, they were left alone; there was no time limit on the Test of the Stomach, after all. But should they prove successful in the harsh school of wasteland survival, find... <br /><br />That should read : "found a good water source and settled there..."CURMY1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-213640212013188609.post-31091038844671928152012-08-31T06:19:19.507-07:002012-08-31T06:19:19.507-07:00No comments on this yet?
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